I like the way that I described the bully's hair " his hair was like a jungle" it is simple and you can easily imagine what his hair is like which is pretty messed up.
The second descriptive quote that I like from my writing is when I say "it feel`s like baby food which I hate" it is very descriptive because every one should know what baby food feels like.
My final quote that I like from my writing is when I say that "eat as fast as the Flash runs" which describes how fast I can eat when my cereal gets soggy.
"Stubborn" is a word that can pretty much describe anyone these days bacause of how people are these days
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